一篇初三水平作文,麻烦批改和指点

文章的要求是针对在泰国度假就餐时对几位中国年轻人的不良行为进行描述并发表看法满分是15分,麻烦批改再提出建议,谢谢!

I spent the Spring Festival withmy family in Thailand this year.We all enjoy this vacation,but one day,a thingwhich made me unhappy happened by accident.

Once,we are enjoying our eating in arestaurant,all of a sudden,I found some young people next to me,from China,weretalking loudly and smoking.At the same time,all the other people in therestaurant paid their angry eyes to those men.Not only did the bad behaviorinfluence others,but also it lowered themselves’ quality,and the most importantis that made others look down on our country.

As far as I concerned,only if we payattention to our action everywhere,we will win others’ regard,as long as werefuse the bad behavior everytime,we can improve our quality.Only when we have a good habit,so much better can weenjoy our life.

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